Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你能表达自己小时候有自行车，也提到了和兄弟骑车，但有多处语法和用词错误，影响理解。注意使用过去时：用“had”而不是“have”；“vibe”应为“bike”；“seldom cycling”应改为“often rode”或“used to ride”。“在周末”可说“at weekends”。最后一句重复表达了自行车很重要，可以改为一个具体原因，例如它让你和兄弟有机会一起玩。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my brothers at weekends, and it was one of my favourite ways to have fun.

제안: 目前答案中多处词语难以辨认，且似乎没有清楚回答自行车在你们国家是否流行。请先直接回答“popular”或“不太流行”，然后补充一至两个具体理由，例如通勤、锻炼或城市骑行环境。避免重复“in my country”，并注意主谓一致：people 后使用“decide”。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, and cycling is also a good way to exercise.

× I have a vibe when I was a child

✓ I had a vibe when I was a child.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，属于过去时间，因此应使用过去式 had，而不是现在式 have。

× I seldom cycling with my brothers

✓ I seldom cycled with my brothers.

seldom 后面不能直接接动词的 -ing 形式。这里描述过去的习惯，应使用一般过去式 cycled。

× with my brothers and weekends

✓ with my brothers on weekends

表示“在周末”时，weekends 前通常使用介词 on。可以记住固定搭配 on weekends。

× I think my bike is important for me when I was a child.

✓ I think my bike was important for me when I was a child.

when I was a child 指过去的时间，因此描述自行车当时很重要时，应使用过去式 was，而不是 is。

× people in my country always decides to travel

✓ people in my country always decide to travel

主语 people 是复数，谓语动词应使用原形 decide，不能使用第三人称单数形式 decides。