Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 그 뒤의 내용은 문법과 발음·표현이 불분명해 의미를 파악하기 어렵습니다. ‘몇 살 때 자전거를 받았는지’와 ‘언제까지 탔는지’를 간단하고 정확한 문장으로 말해 보세요. 과거 경험이므로 과거형을 사용하고, 두 정보를 연결할 때는 *and*를 활용하세요.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I rode it regularly until I started high school. I enjoyed riding around my neighborhood.

제안: 한국에서 자전거가 인기 있는지 직접 답한 뒤, 이유를 한 가지 분명하게 설명해 보세요. *the bike is the popular* 대신 *bikes are popular*라고 하고, 도시에서 자전거를 자주 볼 수 있다는 점을 *There are many…*로 표현하면 자연스럽습니다. 마지막에는 자전거를 이용하기 편리한 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이세요.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Korea. You can see many people riding them in cities, especially along rivers and bike paths. They are also a convenient way to get around.

× I started to buy the vibe when I out of eight people

✓ I started to buy a bike when I was eight.

The clause 'when I out of eight people' is missing a verb and is not grammatically complete. If you mean your age, say 'when I was eight.' The word 'vibe' appears to be a transcription error for 'bike'; this correction assumes that was your intended meaning.

× Yes, the bike is the popular in Korea

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in Korea.

The definite article 'the' should not be used before the adjective 'popular' in this sentence. When speaking generally about bicycles, use the plural noun 'bikes' without an article.

× the poverty bikes are so many in the city

✓ There are many bikes in the city.

To say that many bikes exist in a place, use the structure 'there are' followed by a plural noun. 'Bikes are so many' is not the natural construction. 'Poverty' is unclear in this context, so it has been omitted.

× everybody can use this

✓ Everybody can use them.

The pronoun should refer to the plural noun 'bikes.' Use 'them' rather than the singular demonstrative 'this.'