Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Soruyu tekrar etmek yerine doğrudan çocukken bisikletiniz olup olmadığını söyleyin. Cevap vermekte zorlanırsanız kısa ve basit bir cümle kurun; örneğin “Yes, I did” veya “No, I didn’t” diyerek başlayıp bir ayrıntı ekleyin. “When I was a child” ifadesini doğru kullanmaya dikkat edin.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it in the park near my home.

제안: Önce soruya açıkça cevap verin: bisikletlerin ülkenizde popüler olup olmadığını belirtin. Ardından İstanbul’un kalabalık olmasını bisiklet kullanımına bağlayan düşüncenizi anlaşılır cümlelerle açıklayın. “I live in a decent month” gibi anlamı belirsiz ifadeler yerine, fikrinizi destekleyen somut bir neden veya örnek kullanın. Cümleleri “because” ya da “for example” gibi bağlaçlarla ilişkilendirin.

예시: I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country, especially in Istanbul. Although the city is very crowded, cycling is a convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people ride bikes along the seaside at weekends.

× Did you have a bike when you red eye child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The question refers to childhood, a past time, so use the past form were. The phrase red eye does not work grammatically here; use were a child.

× Popular bikes because I live in very crowded.

✓ Bikes are popular because I live in a very crowded city.

Popular bikes because I live in very crowded is not a complete sentence: the first clause has no verb, and crowded needs a noun to describe. Add are after the subject bikes and use a noun such as city after crowded. Since the question asks about popularity, you could say: I think bikes are quite popular in my country because I live in a very crowded city. I live in Istanbul.