Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答后，用过去时描述小时候骑车的经历。注意动词形式：讲过去的事用“had”“rode”；表达“骑车去学校”可说“rode my bike to school”，不要说“over rode away”。“周末”通常说“on weekends”。删去重复和不完整的表达，并补充一个具体细节即可。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to school. On weekends, I would ride around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 回答切题，也给出了城市和使用场景作为支持。注意“共享单车”应说“shared bikes”，复数形式要与“lots of”搭配；“一些大城市”可以说“some major cities”。还可以补充一个具体原因，例如共享单车方便短途出行或连接地铁。

예시: Yes, they are, especially in major cities like Guangzhou and Shanghai. There are lots of shared bikes available, and people often use them for short trips to work or school. They’re also handy for getting to and from a metro station.

× I have a bike where when I was a child I over rode away to school and.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it to school.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，应该使用过去时。将 have 改为 had；表示骑车去学校时用 rode it to school。

× I have a bike where when I was a child I over rode away to school and.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it to school.

where 和 when 连用导致句子结构混乱，而且句末的 and 没有连接后续内容。删除 where，并将完整意思组织成连贯的句子。

× I roll it around my neighborhood with my friends in weekend.

✓ I rode it around my neighborhood with my friends on weekends.

这句话讲的是小时候的经历，应使用过去时。描述骑自行车时用 rode it，而不是 roll it。

× I roll it around my neighborhood with my friends in weekend.

✓ I rode it around my neighborhood with my friends on weekends.

表示“在周末”时，通常用 on weekends，而不是 in weekend。

× There are lots of shear bike in some big cities like Guangzhou and Shanghai.

✓ There are lots of shared bikes in some big cities like Guangzhou and Shanghai.

lots of 后面接可数名词时，名词要用复数形式，因此 bike 应改为 bikes。这里将 shear 改为 shared，使“共享单车”的表达通顺。