Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Did you have a bio when you were a child?
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
I think not but in China is very dope very man very very a lot of people to use a bicycle to to exercise or do exercise or use the bicycle just for
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 5.0제안: 你把问题中的“bike”听成了“bio”,而且重复了考官的问题,没有回答自己小时候是否有自行车。先确认关键词,再直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,并补充一两句具体经历,例如谁给你买的、你在哪里骑车。
예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 15.0제안: 你的回答有较多重复和不自然的表达(如“very very”“to to exercise”),而且句子没有说完。“I think not”与后面提到很多人骑自行车也有矛盾。先明确表明自行车是否受欢迎,再用具体用途和连接词补充原因。可以说“popular for exercise and short trips”,并避免重复使用“very”。
예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Many people ride them for exercise or to travel short distances, especially in cities where bike-sharing services are widely available.
× I think not but in China is very dope very man very very a lot of people to use a bicycle to to exercise or do exercise or use the bicycle just for
✓ I think not, but in China, a lot of people use bicycles to exercise.
“In China is …”缺少明确的主语;“a lot of people to use”也不能在这里构成完整句子,应改为主语加谓语:“a lot of people use”。句尾“just for”没有接完整内容,因此应删去未完成的部分。