Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then describe the experience using consistent verb tenses. Change “teach” to “taught” and “I’m quite enjoying it” to a past-tense phrase such as “I really enjoyed it.” Break the long sentence into two and add a specific detail about learning to ride.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom often took me to the park and taught me how to ride it. I remember enjoying those trips, especially when I could ride around on my own.

제안: Make your opinion consistent with your evidence: if you often see people riding, say bikes are popular or common. Avoid repeating “I always see,” use the plural “bikes,” and give one specific reason or example to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling in the city, especially during rush hour, because it can be a convenient way to get around. Some people also ride for exercise at the weekends.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and my mom usually took me to the park and teach me how to ride a bike and I'm quite enjoying it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and my mom usually took me to the park and taught me how to ride a bike. I quite enjoyed it.

The answer describes a past childhood experience, so the verbs should remain in the past tense. Use taught, not teach, and enjoyed, not I'm enjoying. Keep the verb tense consistent with the question about the past.

× Yes, I do think riding bikes is quite unpopular in my country because I always see I always see people riding bike along the highway or riding in the city.

✓ Yes, I do think riding bikes is quite unpopular in my country because I always see I always see people riding bikes along the highway or riding in the city.

When referring generally to bicycles, use the plural noun bikes after people riding. Alternatively, you could say people riding a bike. Remember to use a plural noun when describing people riding bicycles in general.