Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “Yes, I did” rather than “Yes, I have.” Add one relevant detail, such as when you rode it or where you went. This will make your answer more complete and natural.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

제안: Your main idea is clear, but use a complete sentence such as “There are many bicycles in my country.” Avoid repeating “go to”; say “commute to school or work” and “exercise.” Also, replace “your day health” with a natural phrase such as “their health.” Add a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where people use them to commute to school or work. They are also an affordable way to get exercise and stay healthy.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asks about a past situation using did you have. The answer should use did, not have, to match the question's past tense.

× In my country have many bicycles.

✓ There are many bicycles in my country.

Use there are to say that something exists in a place. Bicycles is plural, so the correct form is there are.

× Many people use bicycles to go to school or go to work and go to exercise to improve your day health.

✓ Many people use bicycles to go to school or go to work and go exercising to improve their health every day.

When go refers to taking part in an activity, it is commonly followed by a gerund ending in -ing, as in go exercising. Use their to refer back to many people, rather than your. Also, say improve their health every day; day health is not a natural expression.