Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也提供了年龄、购买者和骑车用途等细节，内容比较完整。注意语法：说年龄时用“when I was about ten”，而不是“when I about ten”；表示骑自行车要用“rode it”，不是“wrote it”；“放学后”应说“after school”。减少“uh”等填充词，并把信息整理成两三句，表达会更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bicycle when I was about ten. I rode it after school almost every day for exercise and fun.

제안: 你表达了明确观点，也尝试比较儿童和成年人使用自行车的情况。注意这里应说“bikes are popular”，而不是“biker is popular”；“骑车上学”可以说“ride their bikes to school”，不要说“roll it to school”。避免“and but”连用，并用“many children ride”描述普遍情况。最后可以补充一个具体原因或对比，让回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many children ride them to school or use them for fun, while adults tend to drive because it is more convenient for commuting.

× I had a bicycle, uh, when I about, uh, ten years old, my parents bought it for me.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was about ten years old; my parents bought it for me.

“when I about ten years old”中缺少谓语动词。描述过去的年龄时，需要使用 be 动词过去式“was”，因此应说“when I was about ten years old”。原句还用逗号连接了两个完整句子，改用分号使结构更清楚。

× Many children will have their bicycle to roll it to school or have fun and but adults usually use the car, not bicycle.

✓ Many children will have their bicycle to roll it to school or have fun, but adults usually use the car, not bicycle.

“and but”把两个连词重复使用，造成连词搭配错误。表达转折时保留“but”即可，并在前面用逗号分隔。

× Many children will have their bicycle to roll it to school or have fun and but adults usually use the car, not bicycle.

✓ Many children will have their bicycle to roll it to school or have fun and but adults usually use the car, not a bicycle.

“bicycle”是可数名词单数，在这里表示“一辆自行车”，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。