Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Say whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific details, such as who gave it to you or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about eight. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but improve the grammar and reduce fillers. Use “especially,” say “ride around the city,” and use “on some occasions.” Add a clear supporting reason or example, and aim for smoother delivery.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially at weekends. Many people ride around the city to get some exercise or relax with friends. Some also go on longer cycling tours in the countryside.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, specially uh, people use during the weekends to round the city, relax with friends and uh, at some occasion, uh, they do uh, bike touring.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. In particular, people use them on weekends to ride around the city, relax with friends, and, on some occasions, go bike touring.

Use especially or in particular to mean 'particularly'; specially usually means 'for a special purpose.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, specially uh, people use during the weekends to round the city, relax with friends and uh, at some occasion, uh, they do uh, bike touring.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. In particular, people use them on weekends to ride around the city, relax with friends, and, on some occasions, go bike touring.

The verb use needs an object here. Add them to refer to bikes: people use them. Including the object makes the sentence complete and clear.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, specially uh, people use during the weekends to round the city, relax with friends and uh, at some occasion, uh, they do uh, bike touring.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. In particular, people use them on weekends to ride around the city, relax with friends, and, on some occasions, go bike touring.

Use ride around the city, rather than round the city, to describe cycling through the city. Also, the natural preposition with occasions in this expression is on: on some occasions.