Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也提供了父母买车和喜欢它的原因，但句子连接不自然，且“it was my parents bought it for me”存在语法错误。建议先直接回答，再用一两句说明是谁买的、车的特点以及你喜欢它的原因；避免重复使用“small”和“cute”。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was a child. I loved it because it was cute and easy for me to ride.

제안: 回答中的观点前后不一致：先说自行车不太流行，后面又说在大学很流行。建议明确限定范围，例如说明自行车在全国是否普遍，以及在大学校园里的情况。删去“like”和“I mean”等填充语，并注意“students are always ride”应改为“students often ride”或“students are always riding”。

예시: I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially on university campuses. Many students ride them to class because they are convenient and help them avoid traffic.

× it was my parents bought it for me

✓ my parents bought it for me

“it was”和“my parents bought it”都构成谓语，不能这样直接连在一起。删除多余的“it was”，即可表达“这是我父母给我买的”。

× I really love it because it was so cute and so small.

✓ I really loved it because it was so cute and so small.

这句话描述的是小时候的自行车，时间背景是过去，因此应将一般现在时“love”改为一般过去时“loved”，与“was”保持时态一致。

× in university ... bikes are popular in university

✓ at university ... bikes are popular at university

在这里表示“在大学里／上大学期间”，通常使用“at university”，而不是“in university”。请注意，原句中的两处都应改为“at university”。

× students are always ride a bicycle to class

✓ students always ride bicycles to class

“are”和动词原形“ride”不能这样连用。表达学生通常骑车上课的习惯时，使用一般现在时即可：主语“students”后直接接“always ride”。泛指学生骑车时，用复数“bicycles”更自然。