Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question is about your childhood. Give a clear yes-or-no response, then add a brief, relevant reason. Avoid the unclear phrase “who don't have a package.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t own one, so I usually walked or took the bus to school.

제안: State your opinion clearly and support it with a relevant reason or example. Avoid unrelated or unclear words such as “my God” and “Microsoft”; use a linking word like “because” to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re convenient for short trips and can help people avoid traffic.

× No, I don't have a bicycle who don't have a package.

✓ No, I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child.

The examiner asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use didn't have instead of don't have. The remaining phrase is unclear and does not provide a meaningful answer to the question, so it is omitted.

× Yes, my God, hope for Microsoft, hopefully in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original response does not form a clear sentence: it lacks a clear subject and a finite verb expressing the answer. A complete response can use I think as the subject and verb, followed by the idea that bikes are popular in the country.