Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and add one specific detail, such as where you rode or what you enjoyed doing. “Ride at school” is unclear; say “ride around the school grounds” or “ride to school,” depending on what you mean. Avoid repeating “bike” and “bicycle” when one reference is enough.

예시: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around the school grounds with my friends after class.

제안: Use “popular,” not “populous,” to describe bikes. Answer the question directly, then explain why bikes are popular with a clear supporting detail. Avoid repeating the same idea, and finish your answer with a complete sentence.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who want an affordable way to get around. Many people also ride them on weekends for exercise or leisure.

× I used to ride at school regularly with my friends.

✓ I used to ride to school regularly with my friends.

Use to when you mean traveling to a destination. At school means that the riding happened on the school grounds, which may not express the intended meaning.

× Yes, bikes are populous in my country and also a bike I love to ride it and I rode it regularly on weekends and there's a passion

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. I also love riding a bike, and I ride it regularly on weekends.

Populous describes a place with many people, not something that many people like. Use popular for bikes that are liked or commonly used. Also, since the answer describes a general habit, use the present tense ride rather than rode.

× Yes, bikes are populous in my country and also a bike I love to ride it and I rode it regularly on weekends and there's a passion

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, and I also love riding them regularly on weekends.

The phrase a bike is followed by it as a second object referring to the same bike, which makes the construction redundant. Use one clear structure, such as I love riding bikes or I love riding them.

× Yes, bikes are populous in my country and also a bike I love to ride it and I rode it regularly on weekends and there's a passion

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. I also love riding them regularly on weekends because I have a passion for cycling.

The answer combines several ideas with and, resulting in an awkward, unclear sentence. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and connect the reason clearly with because. The phrase there's a passion is unclear here; I have a passion for cycling expresses the intended idea more naturally.