Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也提供了买车和骑车的细节。注意讲过去的经历时要统一使用过去时：把“have”改为“had”，“it is fun”改为“it was fun”。“for my birthday present”不够自然，可以说“as a birthday present”。另外，“ride around town”比“ride it through the town”更自然。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was about ten. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I used to ride around town with my friends because it was a lot of fun.

제안: 你直接回答了问题，但理由表达不够准确。“bikes are useful for our country”比较笼统，建议具体说明它们在日常生活中的用途，例如通勤、接送孩子或短途出行。注意删去重复的“to”，并把“transportation”改成更自然的表达，如“a popular form of transport”。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re a convenient and affordable way to travel short distances, and some parents use them to take their children to school. They’re also useful for getting around busy town centres.

× I have a small bike when I was just ten years old.

✓ I had a small bike when I was just ten years old.

这句话描述的是十岁时的过去经历，因此 have 应使用过去式 had。叙述过去发生或存在的事情时，注意保持过去时态一致。

× My parents bought it for my birthday present.

✓ My parents bought it as a birthday present.

表达“把某物作为生日礼物”时，应使用 as a birthday present，而不是 for my birthday present。可以记住搭配：buy something as a present。

× I used to ride it through the town with my friends because it is fun.

✓ I used to ride it through the town with my friends because it was fun.

句子描述的是过去和朋友骑车的经历，因此原因部分也应使用过去时。此处应将 is 改为 was。

× We can ride a bike through the town and to to get children to school and home.

✓ We can ride bikes through town and take children to school and back home.

原句中 to 重复出现，而且 ride 和 to get 的并列结构不够协调。可以用 and 连接结构平行的动词短语，例如 ride bikes 和 take children。表达“送孩子上学并接回家”时，可以说 take children to school and back home。

× It's a very important transportation.

✓ It's a very important form of transportation.

transportation 通常是不可数名词，不能直接使用 a 修饰。可以在 transportation 前加可数名词 form，组成 a form of transportation。