Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Відповідь починається прямо, і порівняння дитячого та теперішнього велосипеда додає доречну деталь. Однак приберіть заповнювач «uh», виправте незрозуміле «strain vehicles» (якщо ви маєте на увазі допоміжні колеса — скажіть «training wheels») і не розбивайте фразу про колір на окремі частини. Використовуйте природне формулювання «a bike with an interesting color».

예시: Yes, I had a small pink bike with training wheels when I was a child. Now I have a bigger bike, and it’s a bright color.

제안: Висловіть думку прямо, наприклад, «Yes, I think bikes are quite popular». Уникайте повтору «I I» та виправте граматику: замість «I saw many people who are riding» краще сказати «I see many people riding». Замість незрозумілого «very spread way» використайте «a popular way to get around». Ваш приклад із парками доречний; поясніть його коротко й зв’язно.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people rode bikes as children, and I still see people cycling in parks today. Some even ride in winter, so cycling seems to be a popular activity.

× Yes, I had a little, uh, pink bike with strain vehicles and now I have a big bike with interesting. Color.

✓ Yes, I had a little, uh, pink bike with strain vehicles, and now I have a big bike with an interesting color.

Use the article an before the singular countable noun phrase interesting color. The article is an because interesting begins with a vowel sound. The comma and capitalization have also been adjusted for readability.

× To my mind it is because many people in their childhood used to ride bikes and even now I I saw many people who are riding in the park or even in the winter, so it is very. Spread way.

✓ To my mind, it is because many people used to ride bikes in their childhood, and even now I see many people riding in the park, or even in winter, so it is a very widespread way.

Use see rather than saw because even now refers to the present. Saw is the simple past tense. Also, widespread is the appropriate adjective here, and way is a singular countable noun that needs the article a. Avoid separating very from the adjective with a full stop.