Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question asks about your childhood. Avoid repeating words such as “my parents,” and use natural phrases like “let me ride a bike” and “have an accident.” Briefly explain your parents’ concern, then finish clearly rather than adding “and all.”

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents wouldn’t let me ride one because they were worried I might have an accident. I was disappointed at the time, but I understand their concern now.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with a relevant detail, such as who uses bikes or why they are popular. Use the present simple for general facts (“people use”), and say “different brands” or name a familiar type of scooter. The comment about your parents not permitting you to ride is not needed to answer this question; also, end with a complete thought instead of “So at last I want to say that.”

예시: Yes, bikes and scooters are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they’re affordable and convenient, especially for short trips in busy cities. There are several popular brands, and scooters are common among commuters.

× No I don't have a time because my parents are my parents are not allowing me to ride the bike because they're thinking that I will not ride properly and moreover I can do accident and all that's why they don't trust me at all.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't allow me to ride one. They thought I would not ride properly, and they did not trust me.

The question asks about a past period, so use past-tense forms for events and beliefs from that time: didn't have, didn't allow, thought, and did not trust. Use would rather than will when reporting what someone believed in the past. In general, match the tense of your answer to the time frame in the question.

× No I don't have a time because my parents are my parents are not allowing me to ride the bike because they're thinking that I will not ride properly and moreover I can do accident and all that's why they don't trust me at all.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't allow me to ride one. They thought I would not ride properly and that I might have an accident, so they did not trust me.

When describing a belief held in the past, would is the natural modal form in place of will. Might also expresses the possibility of an accident more naturally than can in this context. Use would or might to describe what someone believed could happen.

× Yes, in my country bikes are so popular. Many people are using different brand of bikes somebody using this planer Scooties of Jupiter and all but I am not permitted to do anything due to my parents. So at last I want to say that.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use different brands of bikes, including [unclear model names], but I am not permitted to ride one because of my parents.

Different refers to more than one brand here, so the plural form brands is needed. Use a plural noun when talking generally about multiple kinds or examples. The model names in the transcript are unclear, so they are marked rather than guessed.

× Many people are using different brand of bikes somebody using this planer Scooties of Jupiter and all but I am not permitted to do anything due to my parents.

✓ Many people use different brands of bikes, and some people use [unclear model names]. However, I am not permitted to ride one because of my parents.

Somebody using is not a complete clause because it has no finite verb. Add a verb such as is using, or revise the subject and verb together, as in some people use. Make sure each clause has a subject and a finite verb.