Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because you are describing your childhood: use “I had” rather than “I have.” Say “a little black-and-red bike,” and use “rode my bike” instead of “wrote my book.” Add one specific detail about how often or where you rode it.

예시: Yes, I had a small black-and-red bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, and I really enjoyed the journey.

제안: Avoid repeating “I don’t,” and give a clear, direct answer. Explain specifically how public transportation affects bike use—for example, whether people prefer buses or trains for commuting. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your reason to your opinion.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer buses and trains because public transportation is convenient and widely available. As a result, fewer people use bikes for their daily commute.

× I have a little black and red color bike.

✓ I had a little black and red bike.

The question asks about a time when you were a child, so use the past-tense verb had instead of the present-tense verb have. The word color is unnecessary in this phrase.

× No I don't I don't think so because in my country public transportation is very different from other countries.

✓ No, I don't. I don't think so because public transportation in my country is very different from that in other countries.

The original sentence compares public transportation with countries, which are not comparable things. Use that to refer back to public transportation, so the comparison is between public transportation in your country and public transportation in other countries.