Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容切题，也提供了买自行车的时间和骑车地点，但需要改进时态、介词和句子结构。讲童年经历时使用过去时：将“have”改为“had”，“in my child”改为“as a child”；表达“骑车去公园”可以说“ride my bike to the nearby park”。注意“often”后要接完整谓语，例如“I often rode...”。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six, and I was thrilled. After school, I often rode it to a nearby park with my friends.

제안: 你表达了自行车不太受欢迎的观点，也尝试给出原因，但回答有重复、语法错误，并且结尾不完整。直接回答后，用一两个具体理由展开即可。可以说“people prefer driving or taking the bus”，不要说“prefer to motor car”；比较级应使用“faster”或“more convenient”，不要在“very”后再加比较级。

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people prefer driving or taking the bus because it’s more convenient and faster for long journeys. However, cycling is still common in parks and on quieter roads.

× Of course, I have a bike in my child.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

这里谈论的是童年时的经历，属于过去的情况，因此应将现在时 have 改为过去时 had。

× Of course, I have a bike in my child.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

“in my child”不能表达“在我小时候”。应使用“when I was a child”表示“当我还是个孩子时”。

× I was very excited and after school I often with my friend by to the nearly park together.

✓ I was very excited, and after school I often rode my bike with my friend to the nearby park.

“I often with my friend...”缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。可补上过去式动词“rode”，并将“my bike”作为其宾语。

× I was very excited and after school I often with my friend by to the nearly park together.

✓ I was very excited, and after school I often rode my bike with my friend to the nearby park.

“nearly”表示“几乎”，不能用来修饰这里的“park”。要表达“附近的公园”，应使用形容词“nearby”。

× People prefer to motor car or by bus because it's very it's very convenient and it's very faster so I think it's not

✓ People prefer to travel by car or bus because it's very convenient and much faster, so I don't think bikes are popular.

“prefer to motor car”中，动词不定式“to”后面需要接动词原形，而“motor car”是名词。可以改为“prefer to travel by car”。

× People prefer to motor car or by bus because it's very it's very convenient and it's very faster so I think it's not

✓ People prefer to travel by car or bus because it's very convenient and much faster, so I don't think bikes are popular.

“faster”已经是比较级，不能在前面使用“very”修饰。可以用“much”修饰比较级，表达“快得多”，因此应说“much faster”。