Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一两个具体细节。答案中的“studied black”“I wear like”和“rider bicycle”表达不清，建议改用简单、准确的词组，例如“when I was ten”“learned to ride a bike”或“rode it to school”。避免用“But”连接不相关的内容；如果需要思考，可以简短说“Let me think”。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about ten, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 开头先明确回答自行车在中国是否流行，然后用一个清晰的理由或例子支持观点。你提到上海和“many, many card basis”的部分不够清楚；如果想表达汽车很多，可以说“there are a lot of cars”。注意“popular”前需要用“are”，并避免重复“I think”和“it's”。可用“Although”或“because”连接观点与理由。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in China, especially in smaller cities. Although Shanghai has a lot of cars, many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× But I think maybe 10 years ago I studied black because I wear like, take a bicycle, rider bicycle.

✓ But I think maybe 10 years ago I studied black because I rode a bicycle.

“10 years ago”表示过去，因此动词应使用过去式。若这里想表达“骑自行车”，应使用“ride”的过去式“rode”。原句中其他部分含义不清，无法仅根据语法准确修正。

× I think Shanghai is the international city.

✓ I think Shanghai is an international city.

这里是在泛指上海是一座国际化城市，并非指某一座特定的“国际城市”。“city”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词；以元音音素开头的“international”前用“an”。

× So I think no popular in my country.

✓ So I think bikes are not popular in my country.

“popular”是形容词，不能单独作谓语。句子需要加入系动词“are”；结合上下文，主语应是“bikes”。否定形式为“are not popular”。