Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Use the phrase “ride a bike” rather than “go to a bike,” and say “every Sunday” without an “s.” Add one specific detail about where you rode or how you felt.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it with my father every Sunday in the park, and I really enjoyed those trips.

제안: Start with a clear answer, such as “Yes, I think they are quite popular.” Use “children” instead of “child's” and “ride bicycles” instead of “cycle the bicycle.” Then give one clear supporting reason or example. The part about parks and bike weight is difficult to understand, so explain what you mean or leave it out.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many families ride them in parks at weekends because it is a fun way to exercise. In some cities, there are also dedicated bike lanes, which make cycling more convenient.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past tense, Did you have...? Use did in the short answer to match the tense of the question.

× I go every Sundays with my father to a bike.

✓ I went biking with my father every Sunday.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form went rather than go.

× I go every Sundays with my father to a bike.

✓ I went biking with my father every Sunday.

Use the singular form Sunday after every. Every is followed by a singular noun.

× I go every Sundays with my father to a bike.

✓ I went biking with my father every Sunday.

To a bike does not correctly express the activity. Use biking or riding a bike to describe the activity.

× I think yes, most of child's cycle the bicycle

✓ I think so. Most children cycle bicycles.

Use the plural noun children when referring to children in general. Child's is a singular possessive form and does not fit here.

× but for example in the parks there are there is an wait just for bikes

✓ But, for example, in the parks, there is a wait just for bikes.

Use only one there is/there are construction. Because wait is singular, use there is.

× but for example in the parks there are there is an wait just for bikes

✓ But, for example, in the parks, there is a wait just for bikes.

Wait begins with a consonant sound, so use a rather than an.

× but some people don't care the bike weight

✓ But some people do not care about the bike's weight.

The expression care requires the preposition about when referring to something that someone considers important. Use care about the bike's weight.