Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也说明了不骑车的原因，但句子过长，多个意思用逗号连接，影响清晰度。“hardly never”不自然，可改为“hardly ever”；“as a result”在这里多余。建议拆分句子，并补充一个具体细节，例如父母如何教你或你为什么害怕。

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle as a child, but I never learned to ride it. I was afraid of falling and getting hurt, even though my parents tried to teach me. I hardly ever used the bike.

제안: 你表达了自行车普及的观点，也给出了通勤和价格方面的理由。不过，“student and officer a communicating”表达不清，应改为“students and office workers commuting”；“occupationally”应为“occasionally”。注意复数和冠词，如“ride bikes”，并用连接词让理由衔接自然。可以补充一个具体的观察场景。

예시: Yes, cycling is quite common in my country. In the morning, I often see students and office workers riding bikes to school or work. My parents also ride bikes occasionally because they are cheap and convenient.

× I did have a bicycle when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it because I was too afraid of getting hurt as a result, I hardly never use it even though my parents try to teach me

✓ I did have a bicycle when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it because I was too afraid of getting hurt. As a result, I hardly ever used it, even though my parents tried to teach me.

这段话描述的是童年时的经历，因此后面的动词也应使用过去时。这里应将“use”改为“used”，将“try”改为“tried”。另外，“hardly ever”表示“几乎从不”，不能与“never”连用；可用“I hardly ever used it”表达“我几乎没用过它”。

× I did have a bicycle when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it because I was too afraid of getting hurt as a result, I hardly never use it even though my parents try to teach me

✓ I did have a bicycle when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it because I was too afraid of getting hurt. As a result, I hardly ever used it, even though my parents tried to teach me.

原句用逗号连接了两个可以独立成句的部分，造成逗号拼接错误。可在“getting hurt”后用句号结束前一句，再用“As a result”引出结果。

× I often see student and officer a communicating by bicycle in the morning and my parents or other family members also ride bike occupationally because it's cheap and convenient.

✓ I often see students and office workers commuting by bicycle in the morning, and my parents or other family members also ride a bike occasionally because it's cheap and convenient.

“student”和“office worker”泛指多类人，应使用复数形式“students”和“office workers”。此外，“ride bike”中的“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词；这里改为“ride a bike”。

× I often see student and officer a communicating by bicycle in the morning

✓ I often see students and office workers commuting by bicycle in the morning.

表示看到某人正在进行某个动作时，可以使用“see + 宾语 + 现在分词”的结构。这里应说“see students and office workers commuting”；“a”不能放在“communicating”前。