Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike or where you rode it. “Bike” is more natural than “cycle” in this context.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a clear opening answer, then explain why bikes are popular with one specific detail. Avoid repeating “base,” and use a more natural phrase such as “help children learn to balance” instead of “learn two-wheelers.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. They are an affordable way to get around, and riding a bicycle also helps children develop balance and confidence.

× Yes I do think that bikes are popular in my country because it is generally the first vehicle that even kids ride and it creates a base base for kids to learn two wheelers.

✓ Yes, I do think that bikes are popular in my country because they are generally the first vehicles that even kids ride, and they create a foundation for kids to learn to ride two-wheelers.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use the plural pronoun they and plural verb forms to agree with bikes. The phrase base base also repeats a word; remove the repetition.

× Yes I do think that bikes are popular in my country because it is generally the first vehicle that even kids ride and it creates a base base for kids to learn two wheelers.

✓ Yes, I do think that bikes are popular in my country because they are generally the first vehicles that even kids ride, and they create a foundation for kids to learn to ride two-wheelers.

In this context, learn needs an activity as its object. Use learn to ride two-wheelers rather than learn two-wheelers. This makes the sentence structure complete and expresses the intended meaning clearly.