Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Yes, I have a pie when I were a child because when I were a child I am a young people with a.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, I think bikes bikes are popular in my country because in my country people always using bike mode in the Veratian and the land.

평가

총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 15.0

제안: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời rõ câu hỏi vì “pie” có thể là phát âm hoặc lựa chọn từ sai của “bike”, và ý phía sau còn dang dở. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ: dùng “I had” thay vì “I have”, và “when I was” thay vì “when I were”. Sau đó bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn đạp xe ở đâu hoặc chiếc xe có màu gì.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 20.0

제안: Bạn đã nêu ý kiến, nhưng lặp từ “bikes” và “in my country”; cụm “people always using bike mode in the Veratian and the land” chưa rõ nghĩa. Dùng cấu trúc đúng như “people often use bikes” và giải thích bằng một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Nếu muốn nói về giao thông, hãy diễn đạt rõ xe đạp thường được dùng ở khu vực nào hoặc cho mục đích gì.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people use them for short trips because they are affordable and easy to park.

문법

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a pie when I were a child because when I were a child I am a young people with a.

✓ Yes, I had a pie when I was a child because when I was a child, I was a young person.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense forms had and was instead of have, were, and am. With the subject I, use was, not were, in this statement.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I have a pie when I were a child because when I were a child I am a young people with a.

✓ Yes, I had a pie when I was a child because when I was a child, I was a young person.

People is plural, but the article a refers to one person. Use the singular noun person after a: a young person. Check that articles and nouns agree in number.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I have a pie when I were a child because when I were a child I am a young people with a.

✓ Yes, I had a pie when I was a child because when I was a child, I was a young person.

The ending with a is incomplete because it does not say what the speaker had or was with. Remove the unfinished phrase or complete it with the intended information.

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, I think bikes bikes are popular in my country because in my country people always using bike mode in the Veratian and the land.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because people always use bike mode in the Veratian and the land.

For a general habit, use the simple present: people always use. Using would need an auxiliary verb, such as people are always using, but the simple present is more suitable for describing a regular habit.

중요 어휘

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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