Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then explain why you did not use the bike often. Avoid starting a sentence with “And even though” because it creates an incomplete sentence; connect the contrast with “although” or “but.” Use “Barbie” with a capital letter, and be more specific about the difficulty, such as having trouble balancing.

예시: Yes, I had a pink bike decorated with Barbie stickers. I loved it because pink was my favourite colour, but I didn’t ride it very often. I found it difficult to balance, so I usually preferred playing indoors.

제안: Give a clear answer and support it with one or two focused details. Correct “those that using bikes” to “people who ride bikes,” avoid repeating “cars,” and replace the unclear ending with a precise explanation of the danger. Linking the reason with “because” or “as a result” will make your response easier to follow.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There aren’t many dedicated bike lanes, so cyclists have to share busy roads with cars. As a result, many people consider cycling unsafe and choose other ways to get around.

× And even though I loved it because I was really a fan of the color pink.

✓ I loved it because I was really a fan of the color pink, but I didn't really use it that much because I had difficulty using it.

The sentence begins with even though, which introduces a dependent clause and requires a main clause to complete the thought. Connect the idea to the following clause with but, or remove even though and make the thought a complete sentence.

× those that using bikes

✓ those who are using bikes

The present participle using needs the auxiliary verb are in this relative clause. Use who for people and include the auxiliary: those who are using bikes.

× cars that do not have any consideration of them

✓ cars that do not have any consideration for them

The standard preposition used with consideration in this meaning is for, not of. Say have consideration for someone.