Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答偏离了问题：考官问你小时候有没有自行车，你却介绍了参加英语俱乐部和备考雅思。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、骑车地点或骑车经历。表达时可用“in this way”代替“by this way”，并避免使用过于口语化的“wanna”。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 你直接回答了问题，但观点展开不足，而且“in particular in the college now”表达不自然。可以说明哪些人常骑自行车、骑车的原因，或补充一个具体场景。注意主谓一致：说自行车普及时用“bikes are popular”，也可以用“especially among university students”。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among university students. They often ride them around campus because it’s convenient and affordable, and it can also save time when they’re travelling between classes.

× This is my first time joining this English club and by this way I wanna improve my spoken English.

✓ This is my first time joining this English club, and in this way I want to improve my spoken English.

“By this way”中的介词搭配不正确。表达“通过这种方式”时应使用“in this way”。“wanna”是口语表达；此处改为“want to”只是使表达更正式，并非语法错误。

× Recently I am preparing the IELTS examination and I want to improve my speaking skills.

✓ Recently, I have been preparing for the IELTS examination, and I want to improve my speaking skills.

“Recently”表示最近开始或发生、并持续到现在的情况时，通常使用现在完成进行时“have been preparing”。此外，“prepare”表示“为考试做准备”时应搭配介词“for”，即“prepare for the examination”。

× Recently I am preparing the IELTS examination and I want to improve my speaking skills.

✓ Recently I am preparing for the IELTS examination, and I want to improve my speaking skills.

表示“为考试做准备”时，动词“prepare”后面需要接介词“for”，因此应说“prepare for the IELTS examination”，而不是“prepare the IELTS examination”。

× Yeah, it's so popular, in particular in the college now.

✓ Yeah, they are very popular, particularly among college students now.

“Bikes”是复数名词，指代它时应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数代词“it”。相应地，谓语也应使用“are”。