Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了骑车上学的原因。不过，答案中有明显的自我重复和停顿（“I don't I didn't”），而且“walk to school is troublesome and tiresome”结构不自然。可以用“Walking to school was...”说明原因，并补充一个具体细节，例如骑车节省时间。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I used it to get to school. I didn’t enjoy walking, as it took quite a long time, so cycling was much quicker and more convenient.

제안: 你清楚表达了自行车很受欢迎，并列举了学生骑车可以去的地方。但“if we have”重复较多，“any, anywhere”不自然，最后的“and we don't”没有说完，影响表达完整性。建议用“they can easily cycle to...”串联例子，并补充一个具体原因，例如方便、经济或有助于避开交通拥堵。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, so students can easily cycle to school, parks, or nearby cafés. They’re also useful for avoiding traffic on short journeys.

× I didn't like to uh, walk to school is troublesome and tiresome.

✓ I didn't like walking to school because it was troublesome and tiresome.

这句话描述的是学生童年时的感受，因此应使用过去时。原句中的“is troublesome”应改为“was troublesome”。

× I didn't like to uh, walk to school is troublesome and tiresome.

✓ I didn't like walking to school because it was troublesome and tiresome.

原句把“I didn't like to walk to school”和“walk to school is troublesome and tiresome”直接连在一起，结构不完整且衔接不自然。可以用“because”连接原因，并将原因部分改为“it was troublesome and tiresome”。

× Of course, it's quite popular.

✓ Of course, they are quite popular.

这里回答的是复数名词“bikes”，所以应使用复数代词“they”，并搭配“are”，不能使用单数的“it is”。

× And if we have bikes, we can go to school, go to parks, libraries and coffee shops and anywhere they like.

✓ If we have bikes, we can go to school, parks, libraries, coffee shops, and anywhere we like.

前半句的主语是“we”，后面描述的也是“我们”想去的地方，因此应使用“we like”，而不是“they like”。

× And we don't.

✓ And we don't have to walk everywhere.

“And we don't”在此处没有说清楚“我们不做什么”，句意不完整。可结合前文骑车出行的语境补充“have to walk everywhere”，使句子完整。