Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有完整结束，且时态和动词搭配有误。谈论童年经历时，用一般过去时，例如“when I was 13”；如果想表达拥有第一辆自行车，可以说“got my first bike”。请直接回答问题，再补充一个具体细节，并用完整句子收尾。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got my first one when I was 13, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

제안: 你的回答表达了肯定态度，但语序和用词不自然。“very like”应改为“really like”；如果想表达“骑自行车”，可以说“like cycling”或“enjoy riding bikes”。建议补充一个具体原因或场景，让回答更完整。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people enjoy cycling because it’s an affordable way to get around, especially for short trips.

× Yes, when I'm thirteen I have ran my first bike but I

✓ Yes, when I was thirteen, I rode my first bike.

句子描述的是过去十三岁时发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。将“I'm”改为“was”，并将骑车的动作表达为过去式“rode”。

× Yes, when I'm thirteen I have ran my first bike but I

✓ Yes, when I was thirteen, I rode my first bike.

“have”后面应接过去分词；“ran”不是“run”的过去分词，“run”的过去分词是“run”。不过，由于句中有明确的过去时间“when I was thirteen”，这里应改用一般过去时“rode”，而不是现在完成时。

× Yes, when I'm thirteen I have ran my first bike but I

✓ Yes, when I was thirteen, I rode my first bike.

句尾的“but I”引出了转折，但后面没有接完整的分句，导致句子未完成。若没有后续内容，应删去“but I”；若要保留“but”，则需要补充完整的转折内容。

× Sure many people very like white in my country.

✓ Sure, many people really like white in my country.

“very”通常不能直接修饰动词“like”。可将其改为“really”，放在动词前；也可以说“like white very much”，把“very much”放在宾语后。