Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答。先明确说“有”或“没有”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如几岁开始骑、谁给你买的，或你通常在哪里骑。注意回答应回应问题，而不是改写问题。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends.

제안: 你有直接回答问题，也提到了孩子有自行车，但表达还不够自然准确。因为 bikes 是复数，应说“they are very popular”，而不是“it's very popular”；“in their own”意思不完整，可改为“their own bikes”。建议再补充一个具体理由或使用场景，例如通勤、锻炼或短途出行，并用 because 或 for example 连接。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live in smaller cities. For example, many children ride their own bikes to school or around their neighbourhood. Bikes are also a convenient way to get around for short trips.

× Yeah, I think it's very popular.

✓ Yeah, I think they are very popular.

这里的“they”指前文复数名词“bikes”，所以不能用单数代词“it”。应使用“they are”，使代词与所指对象的数保持一致。

× Many children have their own bike in their own.

✓ Many children have their own bike.

句尾“in their own”结构不完整：“own”后面没有名词，且“in their own”在这里没有清楚的含义。删除这部分即可保留完整、自然的句子。