Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I had a bike. My father bought it for me as a birthday person on 31 December and I was very excited to write it around the neighborhood.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
I think it's not really because I'm from Thailand, right, and I think the sun is forced. We have to strong sun and it will have a car and motorbike and I and I think it's uh is that I have a air pollution is not belong to riot.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 55.0제안: ตอบคำถามตรงประเด็นแล้ว แต่ควรแก้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง: ใช้ “birthday present” แทน “birthday person” และ “ride it around” แทน “write it around” เพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เช่น สีหรือสถานที่ที่ชอบปั่น เพื่อให้คำตอบเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนขึ้น
예시: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike as a birthday present on December 31, and I was really excited to ride it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 20.0제안: คำตอบยังสื่อความหมายได้ไม่ชัดและมีคำซ้ำกับคำลังเลหลายจุด ควรเริ่มด้วยจุดยืนให้ชัด เช่น “Not really” จากนั้นอธิบายเหตุผลที่เกี่ยวข้อง โดยใช้ “the sun is very strong” หรือ “the weather is hot” และเชื่อมโยงกับการเดินทางด้วยรถยนต์หรือมอเตอร์ไซค์ รวมถึงปัญหามลพิษทางอากาศ หลีกเลี่ยงการใส่คำที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น “right” และ “uh”
예시: Not really. In Thailand, the weather is often very hot, so many people prefer to travel by car or motorbike. As a result, cycling is less common, especially in cities with heavy traffic and air pollution.
문법
× I think it's not really because I'm from Thailand, right.
✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in Thailand.
The original sentence does not clearly complete the idea of whether bikes are popular, and because incorrectly links the clauses. State your opinion directly, then give the location: I don't think bikes are very popular in Thailand.
× We have to strong sun.
✓ The sun is very strong.
Have to must be followed by a base-form verb, but strong is an adjective. To describe the sun, use be before the adjective: The sun is very strong.
× It will have a car and motorbike.
✓ There are cars and motorbikes.
Use there are to say that things exist or are present. It will have does not express this meaning naturally. Since you are describing a general situation, use the present tense and plural nouns.
× I have a air pollution.
✓ I have air pollution.
Air pollution is an uncountable noun, so it does not take a or an. Use air pollution without an article.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)