Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear supporting detail. Use the natural phrase “a bike” or “any bikes,” and avoid fillers and unclear words such as “Attention.” Make sure the example is specific and that your sentence is complete.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I played with toys, especially toy horses. I sometimes rode them around the house and pretended they were real.

제안: State your opinion in a complete sentence, such as “Bikes are very popular in Bangladesh.” Then explain the main reasons with clear linking words. Avoid repeating “they use,” and finish your point with a specific example. Check word forms: say “bikes are popular” rather than “biker pervasive.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in Bangladesh, especially among young people and office workers. Many people use them to commute because they are convenient in busy traffic. Younger people also ride bikes for leisure or to meet friends.

× I used to play with different kinds of toys like horse.

✓ I used to play with different kinds of toys like horses.

Because you are referring to horses as a general category of toys, use the plural noun horses rather than the singular count noun horse.

× Absolutely biker perbasive in Bangladesh particularly among younger generations and employees.

✓ Absolutely, bikes are pervasive in Bangladesh, particularly among younger generations and employees.

The original clause does not have a verb connecting the subject to the adjective pervasive. Add the verb are. Use bikes as the plural subject to match the general meaning.

× They use their bike for mainly two purposes.

✓ They use their bikes mainly for two purposes.

Mainly should be placed before the phrase it modifies, for two purposes. The original placement between for and mainly is awkward; the corrected order is clearer.

× The employee who use the bike for going to work.

✓ Employees who use bikes to go to work.

The plural relative pronoun subject employees requires the plural verb use. The original uses the singular employee with the plural verb use. Also, use the infinitive phrase to go to work for a clearer construction.