Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner’s question directly instead of greeting them. Say whether you had a bike, then add one or two relevant details, such as when you got it or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a direct answer and support it with a clear reason. Use the plural form “bikes” to match the question, and say “by bike” rather than “using bike.” Avoid the self-directed question “Why?” and remove the repeated “to go.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly for short journeys.

× Of course, it is very popular in my country.

✓ Of course, bikes are very popular in my country.

The subject is bikes, which is plural, so it is not an appropriate pronoun. Use the plural noun bikes or the pronoun they.

× It's very accessible for the people to go anywhere they want to to go using bike.

✓ They make it easy for people to go wherever they want by bike.

The sentence refers to bikes, so they should be used instead of it. Making the subject explicit also clarifies what makes travel easy.

× It's very accessible for the people to go anywhere they want to to go using bike.

✓ They make it easy for people to go wherever they want by bike.

The phrase want to to go contains an unnecessary extra to. Use want to go. Rewording the sentence as shown also makes the relationship between bikes and traveling clearer.

× It's very accessible for the people to go anywhere they want to to go using bike.

✓ They make it easy for people to go wherever they want by bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so using bike would normally need an article, as in using a bike. The phrase by bike is a natural alternative that does not require an article.