Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently: “When I was a child” and “I didn’t have the opportunity.” Reduce fillers and self-corrections such as “uh” and “I don’t find.” Add a specific detail, such as why you could not ride the bike or when you eventually used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me one for my birthday, but I didn’t get a chance to ride it at first because I was still learning. I was excited to try it when I finally had the opportunity.

제안: Use “bikes” rather than “our bike,” and say “are becoming more popular.” Explain the reason with accurate phrasing, such as “air pollution has become a major concern” and “people are more aware of protecting the environment.” Avoid repeating “therefore,” and make the final comparison clear: people cycle to work instead of driving.

예시: Yes, bikes are becoming more popular in my country. Air pollution has become a major concern, so people are more aware of the need to protect the environment. As a result, some commuters ride their bikes to work instead of driving.

× When I were a child

✓ When I was a child

The subject I takes was, not were, in the simple past tense. Match the verb form to the subject: I was, but you were.

× At that time, I don't find, I don't have any opportunity to try it.

✓ At that time, I didn't have an opportunity to try it.

The answer describes a past situation, so use the past form didn't have rather than the present form don't have. In a negative past-tense statement, use didn't followed by the base form of the verb.

× Our bike is is becoming more and more popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are becoming more and more popular in my country.

The sentence refers to bikes as a general category, so use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are. Use a plural noun when speaking generally about a type of object.

× Nowadays our pollution is become on a hot topic.

✓ Nowadays, pollution has become a hot topic.

Is become is not the correct verb form here. Use the present perfect has become to describe a change that has happened and remains relevant now. Also, say become a hot topic, without on.

× Therefore they are they tend to ride thereby to go to work instead of there.

✓ Therefore, they tend to ride their bikes to work instead of driving.

The original sentence contains repeated and misplaced words that make its structure unclear. Use one main verb phrase, tend to ride, and make the comparison parallel by following instead of with the gerund driving. Use their bikes to identify what they ride.