Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer directly addresses the question, but it is very brief and gives no supporting detail. Add one specific memory, such as where you rode your bike or who taught you. This will make your response more engaging while keeping it concise.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially after school.

제안: You give a clear opinion and a reason, but the sentence has hesitation, and “considering … so” is grammatically redundant. Avoid describing the whole country as poor; instead, explain that bicycles are an affordable and practical option for many people. Add a specific use or example to support your point.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in India, particularly in smaller towns and rural areas. They are an affordable way to travel short distances, and many people use them to get to work or school.

× Umm, considering India is uh, a poor nation, so many people can just afford bicycles so it is fairly popular.

✓ Since India is a poor nation, many people can just afford bicycles, so they are fairly popular.

The construction uses 'considering' and 'so' together to introduce the same cause-and-effect relationship, which makes the conjunctions redundant. Use 'since' or 'because' to introduce the reason, and use 'so' to introduce the result. For example: 'Since India is a poor nation, many people can just afford bicycles, so they are fairly popular.'

× Umm, considering India is uh, a poor nation, so many people can just afford bicycles so it is fairly popular.

✓ Since India is a poor nation, many people can just afford bicycles, so they are fairly popular.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'bicycles.' Use the plural pronoun 'they' and the plural verb 'are,' or repeat 'bicycles.'