Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use the article “a” before “bike,” and say “ride a bike” rather than “drive it.” Answer directly, then add one specific detail, such as where you rode or how you felt. Avoid fillers like “uh” where possible.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: State your opinion clearly and avoid repeating or correcting words mid-sentence. Use “cars are more popular” instead of “the most popular is car cars,” and say “they have become more convenient and faster.” Add a specific example or comparison to develop your reason.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country; most people prefer cars. Cars are more convenient and faster for commuting, especially in areas where public transport is limited.

× Yes, I used to have bike and I like it, uh, to drive it.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike and I like it, uh, to drive it.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article. Use a before bike when referring to one bike for the first time.

× Yes, I used to have bike and I like it, uh, to drive it.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike and I liked it, uh, to drive it.

The answer refers to the student's childhood, a finished time in the past. Use liked rather than like to keep the verb tense consistent with that past-time context.

× I don't think that bikes are popular in my country. I think the most popular is car cars since it's they become more convenient and fast for commuting.

✓ I don't think that bikes are popular in my country. I think cars are the most popular because they have become more convenient and faster for commuting.

The phrase the most popular is car cars is not arranged as a grammatical clause, and since it's they combines incompatible sentence structures. Use cars are the most popular and connect the reason with because they have become.

× I don't think that bikes are popular in my country. I think the most popular is car cars since it's they become more convenient and fast for commuting.

✓ I don't think that bikes are popular in my country. I think cars are the most popular because they have become more convenient and faster for commuting.

Cars is plural, so it needs the plural verb are, not the singular is. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject.

× I don't think that bikes are popular in my country. I think the most popular is car cars since it's they become more convenient and fast for commuting.

✓ I don't think that bikes are popular in my country. I think cars are the most popular because they have become more convenient and faster for commuting.

The comparison uses more convenient, so the second adjective should also be comparative: faster, not fast. Keep the forms parallel when comparing two qualities.