Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then explain briefly why you did not have a bike. Clarify whether you mean a bicycle or a motorbike, as the age restriction usually relates to motorbikes. Avoid unclear phrases such as “8018 plus year old” and “when you come”; use accurate age expressions and connect your ideas naturally.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought I was too young to ride a motorbike safely, so they said I could get one when I turned 18. Until then, I usually walked or travelled with my family.

제안: Give a clear opening answer, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Use “Yes, they are” rather than “Yet yes,” and say “motorbikes are cheaper than cars” if that is what you mean. Avoid repeating “four-wheeler” and use correct forms such as “can’t get through” and “congested streets.”

예시: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. They are cheaper to buy and run than cars, and they are easier to use in busy city traffic. For example, they can often get through narrow streets where a car might struggle.

× No I didn't have my bike as I was not 8018 plus year old so it's not legal to ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have my bike because I wasn't 18 years old yet, so it wasn't legal to ride a bike.

The noun year must be plural after 18. Use years old to describe an age above one year. The transcript appears to contain a transcription error in 8018 plus; the correction interprets it as 18 years old.

× No I didn't have my bike as I was not 8018 plus year old so it's not legal to ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have my bike because I wasn't 18 years old yet, so it wasn't legal to ride a bike.

The student is describing a situation during childhood, so the verb should remain in the past tense. Change it's not legal to it wasn't legal.

× So my parents told me when you come, when you reach to 18 year you will have your own bike and you can ride freely and with you can also help.

✓ My parents told me that when I reached 18, I would have my own bike, be able to ride freely, and use it to help others.

The student is reporting what the parents said, rather than quoting them directly. In reported speech, change you to I to match the speaker's perspective, and use would instead of will to keep the reported statement consistent with the past-tense verb told.

× So my parents told me when you come, when you reach to 18 year you will have your own bike and you can ride freely and with you can also help.

✓ My parents told me that when I reached 18, I would have my own bike, be able to ride freely, and use it to help others.

The verb reach does not take the preposition to before an age. Say reach 18 or reach the age of 18.

× So my parents told me when you come, when you reach to 18 year you will have your own bike and you can ride freely and with you can also help.

✓ My parents told me that when I reached 18, I would have my own bike, be able to ride freely, and use it to help others.

When stating someone's age, use the plural noun years in a phrase such as 18 years old. The correction uses the more natural expression reached 18, which does not require the word year.

× Yet yes it is very popular in my country as it is very cheap as compared to four Wheeler and you can ride your bike at in a very congested area.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than four-wheelers, and you can ride them in very congested areas.

The question asks about bikes in the plural, so use the plural pronouns they and them when referring to bikes. Using it and your bike shifts to a singular reference.

× Yet yes it is very popular in my country as it is very cheap as compared to four Wheeler and you can ride your bike at in a very congested area.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than four-wheelers, and you can ride them in very congested areas.

The student is speaking about bikes and four-wheelers in general, so use plural nouns: bikes, four-wheelers, and areas.

× Yet yes it is very popular in my country as it is very cheap as compared to four Wheeler and you can ride your bike at in a very congested area.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than four-wheelers, and you can ride them in very congested areas.

Use in to describe riding within an area. The sequence at in is not grammatical; use in a very congested area.

× Also where 44 vehicle 4 wheel four Wheeler not able to came through you can ride your bike there.

✓ Also, where four-wheelers are not able to come through, you can ride your bike.

The sentence refers to four-wheelers generally, so use the plural form. The correction treats the repeated vehicle wording as a transcription error.

× Also where 44 vehicle 4 wheel four Wheeler not able to came through you can ride your bike there.

✓ Also, where four-wheelers are not able to come through, you can ride your bike.

The original clause is missing the verb are, which is needed to complete the phrase four-wheelers are not able to come through. Add a comma after the introductory where-clause to make the sentence easier to follow.

× Also where 44 vehicle 4 wheel four Wheeler not able to came through you can ride your bike there.

✓ Also, where four-wheelers are not able to come through, you can ride your bike.

After able to, use the base form of the verb, come, not its past-tense form, came. Here the sentence describes a general situation, so the present-tense form are not able to come is appropriate.