Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then describe the bike and explain where you rode it. Correct the vocabulary and grammar: say “a small TVS moped with a 50cc engine,” not “small mob” or “fifty C mopet.” Use parallel phrasing such as “to school, college, and tuition classes,” and avoid repeating “used to” unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I had a small TVS moped with a 50cc engine. I used to ride it to school and, later, to college and tuition classes.

제안: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific reason. Use “most people in the country” rather than “most of the country population,” and make the pronouns agree: bikes are “inexpensive” and people use “them.” Replace the awkward phrase “move things from one place to another” with a more natural explanation, such as commuting or carrying goods. Use a linking word like “because” to connect your reason.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because they’re relatively inexpensive and convenient. Many people use them as their main form of transport, especially for commuting and carrying small loads.

× Most of the country population drives bikes so of course bikes are very popular in India as it is comparatively inexpensive.

✓ Most of the country's population rides bikes, so bikes are very popular in India because they are comparatively inexpensive.

The phrase 'the country population' is not formed naturally in English. Use the possessive form 'the country's population' or say 'the population of the country.' The revised sentence also connects the ideas more clearly.

× Most of the country population drives bikes so of course bikes are very popular in India as it is comparatively inexpensive. So people try to use it as their only vehicle to move things from one place to another.

✓ Most of the country's population rides bikes, so bikes are very popular in India because they are comparatively inexpensive. People try to use them as their only means of transportation from one place to another.

The pronouns 'it' and 'them' must agree with the noun they refer to. 'Bikes' is plural, so use 'they' rather than 'it' when referring to bikes, and use 'them' rather than 'it' in the next sentence. 'Their only means of transportation' is a natural way to express the intended idea.