Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in complete sentences and finish your final thought. Use the past tense consistently: say “was a gift from my father” rather than “is gifted by my father.” Add a little specific detail, such as where you rode the bike or why you remember it. Avoid joining several ideas in one long sentence; use linking words such as “also” and “because.”

예시: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my father, and I often rode it with my brother. My mother sometimes took us to a nearby park, where we could ride around safely.

제안: Give a direct, complete answer and explain your point with a clear reason or example. The phrase “according to the last four to five years analysis” is unnatural unless you can identify a specific study; you could instead say “In recent years.” Use “commuting to work or school,” and finish your sentence rather than leaving the idea incomplete.

예시: Yes, bikes have become more popular in my country in recent years. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are convenient and help them avoid traffic. They are also a practical choice for short trips.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid which is gifted by my father.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid; it was a gift from my father.

The speaker is describing a childhood bike, so the past tense is needed. Use was, not is, to refer to the past. The revised wording also expresses clearly that the father gave the bike as a gift.

× I like to ride it often

✓ I liked riding it often.

The answer describes a past childhood habit, so use the past-tense verb liked rather than the present-tense like.

× my mother used to take me to park nearby

✓ My mother used to take me to the nearby park.

Park is a singular countable noun here and needs an article. Use the to refer to the particular park, and place nearby before the noun as an adjective.

× and it is in pink colour

✓ It was pink.

The bike is being described as part of a childhood memory, so use the past-tense verb was instead of is.

× Yes, bikes are very much popular in my country

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

Very directly modifies the adjective popular. Very much is not the standard expression in this sentence; use very popular.

× according to the last four to five years analysis

✓ according to an analysis of the last four to five years

Use of to show the period covered by the analysis. The original phrase places the time expression directly before analysis without the preposition needed to connect them.