Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充年龄、礼物来源和外观即可。注意语法和词汇：用“I got/had one when I was five”；“learned how to ride a bike”；“gave it to me as a birthday present”；自行车应说“pink bike”，不是“pink bag”；表达大小合适可说“the right size for me”。避免重复使用“fit”，并把回答控制在三句左右。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was five. My dad gave it to me as a birthday present, just after I learned how to ride. It was pink and the right size for me, so I really enjoyed riding it.

제안: 观点明确，也举出了上学、上班和休闲骑行等例子，但句子过长且有较多重复和填充词。可先回答“Bikes are quite popular”，再用一两句说明常见用途。注意说“when I’m out/on the road”而不是“when I worked in the road”；“many people”而不是“many of people”；“a relaxing activity”而不是“as they’re relaxing activity”。地点可用“in parks or along the streets”，并避免重复“go to”和“ride a bike”。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling to school or work, especially in busy cities. Others ride them in parks or along the streets for exercise and relaxation.

× Yes, I had back when I was five years old.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was five years old.

这里的 had 后面缺少宾语。前文询问的是自行车，因此可以用代词 one 代指 a bike。

× It's the time that I just learned how to bicycle.

✓ That was when I had just learned how to ride a bike.

学生在讲述童年过去发生的事情，应使用过去时。将 It's 改为 That was；had just learned 表示在后面提到的过去事件之前刚学会。

× My dad gave it for me to my birthday gift.

✓ My dad gave it to me as a birthday gift.

表示把东西给某人时用 give something to someone；表示“作为生日礼物”时用 as a birthday gift。这里 for 和 to 的搭配不正确。

× When I worked in the road, I saw many of people will ride a bike.

✓ When I worked on the road, I saw many people riding bikes.

表示看到某人正在做某事时，可以使用 see + 宾语 + 现在分词，因此这里应使用 riding，而不是 will ride。另外，表示“在路上”通常用 on the road。

× I saw many of people.

✓ I saw many people.

many 直接修饰可数名词复数时，不加 of。应说 many people。只有在特定结构中，例如 many of the people，才需要使用 of。

× They will ride a bike as they're relaxing activity.

✓ They will ride a bike as their relaxing activity.

they're 是 they are 的缩写，不能用来修饰名词 activity。这里需要表示所属关系的物主限定词 their。

× In the park, in the road or someplace.

✓ In the park, on the road or someplace.

表示在道路上活动时，通常使用 on the road，而不是 in the road。