Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，但问题询问的是童年经历，所以要用过去时，例如“had”和“rode”。骑自行车应说“ride a bike”，而不是“drive it”。可以补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你通常骑车去哪里，或你为什么喜欢骑车。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue, and I rode it to school almost every day. I really enjoyed the ride because it was fun and convenient.

제안: 先明确回答自行车现在是否在你们国家受欢迎。你的回答提到了“20世纪80年代”，但没有清楚回应现在的情况；如果想谈过去，可以用过去时并说明时间。注意拼写和表达：用“bikes”或“bicycles”，说“in the 1980s”，以及“the country of bicycles”。可以补充一个具体原因或比较，让回答更清楚。

예시: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. In the 1980s, bicycles were even more common because fewer people owned cars. People often used them to commute to work or school.

× Yes, I have a bike and I drive it from home to school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and I drove it from home to school.

问题问的是你小时候的情况，因此回答需要用过去时。have 应改为 had，drive 应改为 drove。

× Yes, Bak is very popular in our country in nineteen eighties.

✓ Yes, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1980s.

句子描述的是过去的情况，因此应使用过去时：is 改为 were。

× Yes, Bak is very popular in our country in nineteen eighties.

✓ Yes, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1980s.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes，而不是单数形式。

× Yes, Bak is very popular in our country in nineteen eighties.

✓ Yes, bikes were very popular in our country in the 1980s.

表示某个年代时，年代前通常要加定冠词 the，例如 the 1980s。

× Our country was called Cord the country of bike.

✓ Our country was called Cord, the country of bikes.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数 bikes。Cord 后加逗号，表示后面的 the country of bikes 是对 Cord 的补充说明。