Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I had a buy when I was a child. I got it from my parents and when I don't remember exactly, I think I was in right fine and I were very happy because I could write it about the neighborhood.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes umm by a popular in Vietnam because umm it's very eco friendly and umm convenient for people want to change umm the place near.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 35.0제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và có nêu người tặng xe cũng như cảm xúc của mình. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa các lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp: dùng “bike” thay cho “buy”, “ride” thay cho “write”, và “I was” thay cho “I were”. Cụm “when I don't remember exactly” chưa tự nhiên; có thể nói “I don’t remember exactly how old I was”. Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời thành các câu ngắn, rõ ràng và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về việc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.
예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me when I was about eight, although I don’t remember the exact age. I was really happy because I could ride it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 42.0제안: Bạn đã nêu quan điểm và hai lý do phù hợp: xe đạp thân thiện với môi trường và tiện lợi. Tuy nhiên, cần bỏ các từ đệm “umm”, sửa “by a popular” thành “bikes are popular”, và diễn đạt rõ hơn ý “đi đến những nơi gần đó” bằng “travel short distances”. Hãy dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “also” và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể, chẳng hạn đi học hoặc đi chợ.
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially for short journeys. They’re eco-friendly and convenient for getting to nearby places. For example, some people ride them to school or to the local market.
문법
× I were very happy.
✓ I was very happy.
The subject I takes was, not were, in the simple past. Match the past form of be to its subject: I was, but you were.
× I could write it about the neighborhood.
✓ I could ride it around the neighborhood.
About does not express movement through an area here. Use around to describe riding through the neighborhood. Ride is also the appropriate verb for using a bike.
× Yes, umm, by a popular in Vietnam because umm it's very eco friendly and umm convenient for people want to change umm the place near.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in Vietnam because they are very eco-friendly and convenient for people who want to travel nearby.
Use the plural subject bikes with are to form the statement correctly. The original phrase by a popular is missing the correct subject and verb. Also, add who to introduce the clause describing people: people who want to travel nearby.
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