Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“有”，并用过去时描述童年经历。把“have back in my child”改为“had a bike when I was a child”，“sent by my father”改为“given to me by my father”；骑自行车用“rode”，放学后说“after school”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车去哪里。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my sixth birthday, and I loved it. I rode it around our neighborhood almost every day after school.

제안: 先清楚回答自行车是否流行，再给出一到两个明确原因。原回答中关于交通的表达难以理解；可以使用“avoid traffic jams”（避开交通堵塞）和“a convenient and affordable way to get around”（方便且经济的出行方式）。避免重复或未完成的词句，并用“because”连接原因。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Many people ride them because they can avoid traffic jams. They’re also an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances.

× Yes, I have back in my child and it was sent by my father when I was six years old and I liked it very much. I drove it every day after my school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was sent by my father when I was six years old. I liked it very much. I drove it every day after my school.

这句话描述的是童年发生的事情，应该使用过去时。原句中的“have”是现在时，应改为“had”。回答过去经历时，注意让相关动词保持过去时。

× Umm, yes, they're quite popular in our country because the bag is a a traffic J is can avoid us to meet the traffic jam and it's a good traffic boat toll.

✓ Umm, yes, they're quite popular in our country because bikes can help us avoid traffic jams, and they're a good means of transportation.

情态动词“can”后面应直接接动词原形，不能在“can”前加“is”。因此应使用“bikes can...”，而不是“bikes are can...”。回答时可以记住“主语 + can + 动词原形”的结构。

× Umm, yes, they're quite popular in our country because the bag is a a traffic J is can avoid us to meet the traffic jam and it's a good traffic boat toll.

✓ Umm, yes, they're quite popular in our country because bikes can help us avoid getting stuck in traffic jams, and they're a good means of transportation.

动词“avoid”后面通常接动词的 -ing 形式，不能接“to + 动词原形”。所以这里应说“avoid getting stuck”，而不是“avoid us to meet”。可以记住结构“avoid + 名词或动词-ing”。