Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
No, I didn't have a bike when I am a child.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Absolutely, many people use the sharing bikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答直接,但时态错误。因为是在谈过去,应将“am”改为“was”。此外,答案只有一个简单句,可以补充一个具体原因或相关经历,使回答更完整,例如说明家庭经济情况、居住环境,或你当时通常使用的交通方式。
예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe to ride on the busy roads near our home, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 68.0제안: 回答观点明确,但“the sharing bikes”表达不自然,建议改为“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。同时,回答过于简短,可以使用“especially”补充流行的地点或人群,并说明人们喜欢骑车的原因,例如方便、便宜和环保。
예시: Absolutely. Shared bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them because they are convenient, affordable, and better for the environment.
× No, I didn't have a bike when I am a child.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
句子描述的是童年时期的经历,属于过去的时间,因此要使用一般过去时。主语是 I,be 动词的过去式应为 was,而不是 am。建议看到 when I was a child、when I was young 等过去时间表达时,使用 was/were。
× Absolutely, many people use the sharing bikes.
✓ Absolutely, many people use shared bikes.
这里的 bikes 表示“被共享的自行车”,应使用过去分词 shared 作定语,而不是现在分词 sharing。shared bikes 意为“共享单车”。此外,泛指共享单车时通常不使用定冠词 the。