Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 過去の経験について尋ねられているため、「I have a bike」ではなく「I had a bike」と過去形を使いましょう。また、「use use」の重複を避け、「I like riding a bike」を繰り返さないように表現を変えると、より自然で効果的です。「with music」は自転車に音楽を付けるように聞こえるため、「while listening to music」など、音楽を聴きながら乗ることを明確に表現してください。最後に、子どもの頃の具体的な思い出や理由を1つ加えると、内容がより充実します。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to school, and I really enjoyed cycling while listening to music. It was a convenient way to get around and helped me stay active.

제안: 質問には直接「Yes, I think they are popular」と答えてから、理由を説明しましょう。「on my way to school I saw many bikes on board」は不自然です。「I often saw many people riding bikes on their way to school」や「I saw many bicycles near my school」のように、誰がどこで自転車を使っていたのかを明確にしてください。また、「and thank you」は回答に不要なので削除し、代わりに交通渋滞の回避や健康面など、具体的な利点を加えましょう。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see many students riding them to school, especially in the morning. They are affordable, convenient, and useful for avoiding traffic jams.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense had is needed instead of the present tense have. Use the past tense when describing something you possessed during a past period.

× I usually use use it when I go to school and I like riding a bike.

✓ I usually used it when I went to school, and I liked riding my bike.

The sentence refers to a past routine during childhood. Therefore, use used, went, and liked. Also, use my bike to refer clearly to the bike you owned.

× I like riding a bike with music.

✓ I liked riding my bike while listening to music.

Because this sentence describes your childhood experience, the past tense liked is more appropriate than the present tense like. The phrase while listening to music clearly expresses that you listened to music as you rode.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because on my way to school I saw many bikes on board and thank you.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because I see many bikes on the road on my way to school.

The statement describes a current reason why bikes are popular, so the present tense see is more suitable than the past tense saw. Use the present tense for observations that are generally or currently true.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because on my way to school I saw many bikes on board and thank you.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because I see many bikes on the road on my way to school.

On board is not the correct expression for bikes traveling on a street. Use on the road when referring to bikes traveling on a street. In addition, and thank you is unnecessary in this answer and should be omitted.