Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer does not clearly answer the question and contains several grammatical and word-choice errors. Begin with a direct answer, such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t.” Then add one or two specific details, such as what type of bike you had, where you rode it, or how often you used it. Avoid repeating words and confusing “bike” with “cycle.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: You give a positive answer, but the rest of the response is difficult to understand because the sentence structure and vocabulary are unclear. State your opinion directly and support it with a specific reason or example. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example,” and avoid listing disconnected company names. Keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who commute short distances. They are affordable and convenient, and many people also ride them for exercise. For example, it is common to see cyclists in parks and along the roads at weekends.

× Mom, when are you child?

✓ When I was a child, ...

The question is about a past time, so the past-tense verb was is needed. The phrase when are you child is also incomplete and should be changed to when I was a child.

× I don't know bike?

✓ I didn't have a bike.

This sentence does not clearly express the intended meaning and uses an incorrect structure. Because the question asks about the speaker's childhood, use the past-tense structure I didn't have a bike.

× Cycle and and I will try.

✓ I rode a bicycle, and I tried it.

The conjunction and is repeated unnecessarily. Use and only once to connect the two clauses.

× Yes, I think we buy most of the popular in Japan and Yamabai compiling most of the popular Yamaha pariyama bike company 8 dabbaita Japan country.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Japan, and Yamaha is one of the most popular bicycle companies in the country.

Bicycles is plural, so it takes are, not is. Yamaha is a singular company name, so it takes is. The original sentence also contains unclear verb forms, such as buy and compiling. Use are popular to describe the popularity of bicycles and is one of the most popular companies to identify Yamaha.

× Yamabai compiling most of the popular Yamaha pariyama bike company

✓ Yamaha is one of the most popular bicycle companies.

After one of the most popular, the noun must be plural because the phrase refers to one company within a group of companies. Therefore, use companies rather than company.

× Japan country

✓ the country

When referring back to Japan as the country being discussed, use the definite article the before country. The natural phrase is in the country.