Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接回答了问题，也补充了骑车的时间和同伴，但有多处词汇和表达影响理解：“brake bike”应改为“basic bike”或“small bike”；“while I was trying”表达不完整；“hotel”很可能应为“hometown”或“neighborhood”；“pregnant”不符合语境，应改为“playing”或“chatting”。建议使用“when I was learning to ride”和“ride around my neighborhood”等自然表达，并用一个具体细节结尾。

예시: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, and I used to cycle around my neighborhood with my friends almost every afternoon. We often explored nearby streets and stopped at a park to play together.

제안: 回答观点明确，也给出了价格低和短途方便两个理由，但句子过长，连接不够清晰，且最后一句没有完整结束。“bike sharing service”应改为复数“bike-sharing services”；“shirt bags”应改为“shared bikes”。建议拆分句子，使用“For example”引出具体场景，并完整说明人们使用共享单车的目的。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips, and many cities offer bike-sharing services. For example, people often use shared bikes to commute to work, go shopping, or travel from a subway station to their destination.

× I used to ride around my hotel with my friends almost every afternoon exploring the neighborhood and pregnant together.

✓ I used to ride around my hotel with my friends almost every afternoon, exploring the neighborhood and playing together.

“Pregnant”是形容词，意思是“怀孕的”，不能表示和朋友一起进行的活动。这里需要使用动词“playing”，与“exploring”保持平行结构。建议注意并列结构中动词形式的一致性，例如“exploring and playing”。

× There are many bike sharing service.

✓ There are many bike-sharing services.

“many”后面必须接可数名词的复数形式，所以“service”应改为“services”。“bike-sharing”在这里作复合形容词修饰“services”，通常需要加连字符。

× So that's why we believe they are popular in.

✓ So that's why we believe they are popular in our country.

介词“in”后面缺少地点或范围，导致句子意思不完整。应在“in”后面补充“our country”。也可以直接说“That's why we believe they are popular.”