Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and keep the tense consistent. Because the question asks about the past, use “had,” not “have.” Avoid repeating the same idea in two short sentences. Add one specific supporting detail, such as where you rode the bike or who you rode it with.

예시: Yes, definitely. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. We usually went to the park after school.

제안: Respond directly to the question about the popularity of bikes in your country. The opening about having a bag is irrelevant, and the answer contains repeated words, incomplete phrases, and unclear grammar. State your opinion first, then give a reason and a specific example. Use “after school,” not “after a school,” and avoid ending with an unfinished sentence.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people ride bikes to school, to nearby shops, or around their neighborhoods.

× Yeah, definitely. Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, definitely. Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about a situation in your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change have to had because the action happened in the past.

× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child it was a very it was a very wonderful wonderful day then and then I then I have then I usually rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child. It was a very wonderful day, and I usually rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

The original response contains a run-on sentence, repeated words, and several unnecessary fillers. Use a full stop to separate the ideas, and connect related ideas with and. Avoid repeating words such as very wonderful and I then I.

× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child it was a very it was a very wonderful wonderful day then and then I then I have then I usually rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child. It was a very wonderful day, and I usually rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

Have is present tense, but the speaker is describing childhood. Use had for possession in the past. The verb rode is already correctly used in the past tense.

× For example, we often went to the park after a school and I rode it all

✓ For example, we often went to the park after school, and I rode it around the park.

The expression after school refers to the general activity of attending school, so it does not take the article a. Also, rode it all is incomplete, so the sentence needs a clear ending such as around the park.

× For example, we often went to the park after a school and I rode it all

✓ For example, we often went to the park after school, and I rode it around the park.

The original sentence is incomplete because rode it all does not express a complete idea. Add the location around the park, and use a comma before and to join the two complete clauses clearly.