Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan “Yes, I did” diyerek başlıyor ve çocukluk deneyiminizle ilgili ayrıntılar veriyorsunuz. Ancak “very first first”, “price position”, “raising each other” ve “Having a bike back then gay” gibi ifadeler yanlış veya anlaşılması zor. “Prized possession” (değerli eşya), “racing each other” (birbirimizle yarışmak) ve “exploring new areas” ifadelerini kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca bazı kelimelerin tekrarı ve yarım kalan cümleler akıcılığı azaltıyor. Cevabı üç veya dört net cümleyle, geçmiş zaman yapısını tutarlı kullanarak tamamlayın.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bicycle when I was about seven years old, and it was bright red. It quickly became one of my most prized possessions. My friends and I used to spend hours riding around the neighborhood, racing each other and exploring new areas.

제안: Cevabınız iyi bir giriş yapıyor ve popülerliğin artmasının nedenlerini açıklıyorsunuz. “For fitness or activity” yerine “for exercise and leisure” daha doğal olur; “daily communicating” ise yanlış kullanımdır ve “daily commuting” şeklinde söylenmelidir. “Hat trick” bu bağlamda uygun değil; burada “dangerous” veya “heavy” kullanabilirsiniz. “However” bağlacıyla olumlu ve olumsuz durumu başarılı biçimde karşılaştırmışsınız, ancak son cümleyi akıcı ve net biçimde tamamlamaya dikkat edin.

예시: I would say that bikes are becoming increasingly popular, especially among younger people. In recent years, more people have started cycling for exercise and leisure, particularly at weekends. However, cycling for daily commuting is still uncommon because many roads lack proper bike lanes and the traffic can be quite dangerous.

× My friends I I used to spend hours riding around our neighborhood after school, raising each other and exploring new I areas.

✓ My friends and I used to spend hours riding around our neighborhood after school, racing each other and exploring new areas.

The sentence has an incorrect subject structure because My friends I I is not a correctly coordinated subject. Use My friends and I when referring to yourself and other people as the subject. The repeated I and the unnecessary I before areas should also be removed. Also, racing is the correct word when describing a competition between people on bicycles.

× Having a bike back then gay.

✓ Having a bike back then was great.

The original sentence does not contain a correct main verb. Having a bike is the subject, so it needs a linking verb such as was before the adjective great. Because the question asks about the past, was is the appropriate tense.