Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题。应先直接回答“Yes”或“No”，然后补充具体细节，例如你几岁开始骑车、在哪里骑，以及骑车的感受。建议使用“because”“when”或“so”等连接词，使答案更自然、更完整。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven and usually rode it around my neighborhood after school. It was a simple blue bike, but I really enjoyed riding it with my friends.

제안: 你没有表达自己的观点，而是重复了考官的问题。应先明确回答“Yes, I do”或“No, I don’t”，再说明自行车受欢迎的原因，并提供具体例子，例如通勤、锻炼或环保。答案控制在2至4句话，并使用“because”“especially”或“for example”等连接表达。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to commute, especially in large cities where traffic is heavy. For example, bike-sharing services are widely available and convenient.