Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly without repeating it. Give a brief reason or extra detail to make your response more developed. For example, explain whether you were interested in cycling or why your family did not buy you a bike.

예시: No, I didn’t. My parents couldn’t afford to buy me one, so I usually played football with my friends instead.

제안: Use the plural form “bikes” and say “in my country” instead of “in here.” Also, “people are poor” is grammatically correct, but it may be too general and insensitive as an explanation. Give a more specific reason, such as traffic, public transportation, safety, or limited cycling lanes. Use a linking word such as “because” or “although” to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and delivery workers. However, many people prefer cars or public transport because the roads can be dangerous and there are not enough cycling lanes.

× The bike in here is not popular because people is poor.

✓ Bikes in my country are not popular because people are poor.

The question asks about bikes in general, so use the plural noun "bikes" rather than the singular "the bike." The plural subject "bikes" also requires the plural verb "are."

× The bike in here is not popular because people is poor.

✓ Bikes in my country are not popular because people are poor.

"People" is a plural noun, so it must be followed by the plural verb "are," not "is."