Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本理解了问题，但将“bike”误说成“bank”，并且时态、句子结构和表达不够准确。应直接回答“是”或“不是”，使用过去时“had”，然后补充自行车的颜色、来源或使用场景。避免反复说“that's my father”和“give me”，这些内容会造成信息混乱；可以使用“because”“and”“so”等连接词，使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue, and my father gave it to me as a birthday present. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: 回答中再次把“bikes”说成了“banks”，导致关键词错误；“were popular ten years ago”以及“aren’t popular now”才是正确的语法结构。建议先明确表达观点，再进行过去与现在的比较，并说明原因，例如交通拥堵、环保意识或公共自行车的发展。避免重复使用“but”，可用“however”连接转折。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They were less common ten years ago, but many people ride them now because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. However, some people still prefer cars for longer journeys.

× I have a bank when I was a child.

✓ I had a bank when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，时间发生在过去，所以应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had。

× I remember that is a blue one.

✓ I remember that it was a blue one.

that 后面需要一个完整的从句，因此要添加代词 it 作主语。这里 it 指代前面提到的物品。

× I remember that is a blue one.

✓ I remember that it was a blue one.

描述童年时的自行车或物品时，事情发生在过去，所以 be 动词应使用过去式 was，而不是现在式 is。

× I think banks are popular in my country that 10 years ago but but now the banks don't popular in my country.

✓ I think banks were popular in my country 10 years ago, but now banks aren't popular in my country.

“10 years ago”明确表示过去的时间，因此应使用 were。连接两个相反观点时，应使用 but，并删除重复的 but。

× I think banks are popular in my country that 10 years ago but but now the banks don't popular in my country.

✓ I think banks were popular in my country 10 years ago, but now banks aren't popular in my country.

popular 是形容词，不能直接放在 do not 后面。表达“现在不受欢迎”时，需要使用 be 动词的否定形式：are not，缩写为 aren't。