Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Begin with a clear response such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details about the bike or how you used it. Also, use the correct structure: “When you were a child,” not “When were your child?”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a complete answer and avoid repeating “in my nation.” Use more natural expressions such as “in my country” and “people are concerned about their health.” Replace the incomplete phrase “a lot of various” with a specific noun, such as “different types of bikes” or “cycling activities.” Organize your answer with a clear reason and a specific example or result.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, mainly because many people want to stay healthy and avoid traffic. In addition, cycling is an inexpensive way to travel, especially in large cities. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use them for exercise on weekends.

× Did you have bike?

✓ Did you have a bike?

The singular countable noun bike requires an article. Use a because this is a general reference to one bike.

× When were your child?

✓ When were you a child?

Your is a possessive adjective and must be followed by a noun, as in your child. Here, the subject is the listener, so use the subject pronoun you.

× When were your child?

✓ When were you a child?

The singular countable noun child requires the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is a child.

× Yeah, I think in my nation bikes are very popular because in my nation, mostly people try to focus on health and a lot of various

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because most people try to focus on their health.

Use most people, not mostly people, when referring to the majority of people. Also, a lot of various is incomplete and does not express a clear quantity, so it should be removed or followed by a specific plural noun.

× Yeah, I think in my nation bikes are very popular because in my nation, mostly people try to focus on health and a lot of various

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country because most people try to focus on their health.

The original answer ends with the incomplete phrase a lot of various, which has no noun and makes the sentence unfinished. Complete the idea with a specific noun or omit the phrase. The revised sentence is complete and directly answers the question.